I love lists of all kinds. Grocery lists, to-do lists, “catalog
verse,” Wikipedia tables (there is a page that contains a list of
microorganisms tested in outer space). My interest in the form was sparked when
I was an MFA candidate at University of British Columbia in 1992 and I
discovered a book by Robert Kroetsch called Seed
Catalogue. One long autobiographical poem, it begins with a listing from
the catalogue for “Copenhagen Market Cabbage” complete with the catalogue
number. I had never seen anything like it before, and it both irritated and
fascinated me. This was poetry? Why? I have since read that an implicit lesson
in this kind of writing is that “from the apparently innocent, ‘documentary,’
past we may inherit important meaning and ways of seeing” (Russel Brown, “Seeds
and Stones: Unhiding in Kroetsch’s Poetry,” Open
Letter, 1984). It was my introduction to the concept of poem-as-palimpsest,
an ongoing conversation with ourselves, other poets and collectors, science and
history.
verse,” Wikipedia tables (there is a page that contains a list of
microorganisms tested in outer space). My interest in the form was sparked when
I was an MFA candidate at University of British Columbia in 1992 and I
discovered a book by Robert Kroetsch called Seed
Catalogue. One long autobiographical poem, it begins with a listing from
the catalogue for “Copenhagen Market Cabbage” complete with the catalogue
number. I had never seen anything like it before, and it both irritated and
fascinated me. This was poetry? Why? I have since read that an implicit lesson
in this kind of writing is that “from the apparently innocent, ‘documentary,’
past we may inherit important meaning and ways of seeing” (Russel Brown, “Seeds
and Stones: Unhiding in Kroetsch’s Poetry,” Open
Letter, 1984). It was my introduction to the concept of poem-as-palimpsest,
an ongoing conversation with ourselves, other poets and collectors, science and
history.
Or maybe my fascination began with my initial interest in poetry
itself. It was 1989, I employed as a forklift driver in the warehouse at Alaska
Pulp Corporation in Sitka, and a friend called me from Fairbanks with an urgent
request. “You have to hear this,” she said. She had just attended a Joy Harjo
reading, and she proceeded to read “I Give You Back” to me over the phone. I
was twenty-five years old. I was stunned. You could say these things out loud?
You could list your fears and speak directly to them? The world could receive
your obsessions and anger, and this was poetry? I wanted more. I enrolled in a
creative writing class at University of Alaska Southeast, with Ken
Waldman. Three short years later I was
living in Vancouver, BC and in a graduate-level poetry workshop with people who
are still my dear and fast friends.
itself. It was 1989, I employed as a forklift driver in the warehouse at Alaska
Pulp Corporation in Sitka, and a friend called me from Fairbanks with an urgent
request. “You have to hear this,” she said. She had just attended a Joy Harjo
reading, and she proceeded to read “I Give You Back” to me over the phone. I
was twenty-five years old. I was stunned. You could say these things out loud?
You could list your fears and speak directly to them? The world could receive
your obsessions and anger, and this was poetry? I wanted more. I enrolled in a
creative writing class at University of Alaska Southeast, with Ken
Waldman. Three short years later I was
living in Vancouver, BC and in a graduate-level poetry workshop with people who
are still my dear and fast friends.
There is a gorgeous 1982 documentary film called Poetry In
Motion, directed by Ron Mann. It features several different poets of different
schools; some of my favorite clips are Amiri Baraka reading “Wailers” and
Toronto experimental poet Christopher Dewdney reading from A Natural History of Southwestern Ontario, Book 2, “Grid Erectile.” In
this clip, Dewdney repeats the word “because” at the beginning of every line.
The effect is hypnotic. The repetition and the detail become a sort of mantra:
Motion, directed by Ron Mann. It features several different poets of different
schools; some of my favorite clips are Amiri Baraka reading “Wailers” and
Toronto experimental poet Christopher Dewdney reading from A Natural History of Southwestern Ontario, Book 2, “Grid Erectile.” In
this clip, Dewdney repeats the word “because” at the beginning of every line.
The effect is hypnotic. The repetition and the detail become a sort of mantra:
Because it is a
predator.
predator.
Because of its
inky fur. Tunnels twisting around roots.
inky fur. Tunnels twisting around roots.
Because it is a
southern species migrating northwards.
southern species migrating northwards.
Evidence
for an inter-glacial warming trend.
for an inter-glacial warming trend.
Because of their
glowing eyes in the driveway at night.
glowing eyes in the driveway at night.
Their
rasping marsupial cries.
rasping marsupial cries.
Because of the
caves.
caves.
Because of its
unearthly face.
unearthly face.
Because it is
all of night.
all of night.
Because it is a
falcon.
falcon.
Because it is
sub-tropical.
sub-tropical.
Because it is a
stilted & accurate blue mist.
stilted & accurate blue mist.
The poem goes on like this, exactly like this, and my favorite
moment happens much later (and this moment is “favorite” to me because it comes
back to me again and again): — “Because I grew up beside them and they taught
me everything I know.”
moment happens much later (and this moment is “favorite” to me because it comes
back to me again and again): — “Because I grew up beside them and they taught
me everything I know.”
Here, the natural world becomes both universe and university. For
me, growing up on Dimond Drive, walking to Tudor Elementary School and playing
in Wickersham Park, skating along Campbell Creek in the winter and watching the
Campbell Creek Classic from my back porch in the summer, the “they” in this
line are the willows, the moving water, the nasturtiums in my neighbor’s yard,
the collie named “Lady” running up and down the chain-link fence next door, the
gooseberry and red currant patch beside the house, every curve of the creek,
the black spruce, a winter sun coming up into St. Mary’s Church in the morning,
Mount Susitna, Russian Jack Springs, and so much more. They are William Carlos
Williams’ “reddish, purplish, forked, upstanding, twiggy stuff of bushes.” They
are Keats’ autumn sun that would “touch the stubble plain with rosy hue”. All
quite romantic, I know, but what do we have, as writers, but the lists and the
catalogs of those images that obsess and fascinate us, and the early
experiences that taught us everything we know?
me, growing up on Dimond Drive, walking to Tudor Elementary School and playing
in Wickersham Park, skating along Campbell Creek in the winter and watching the
Campbell Creek Classic from my back porch in the summer, the “they” in this
line are the willows, the moving water, the nasturtiums in my neighbor’s yard,
the collie named “Lady” running up and down the chain-link fence next door, the
gooseberry and red currant patch beside the house, every curve of the creek,
the black spruce, a winter sun coming up into St. Mary’s Church in the morning,
Mount Susitna, Russian Jack Springs, and so much more. They are William Carlos
Williams’ “reddish, purplish, forked, upstanding, twiggy stuff of bushes.” They
are Keats’ autumn sun that would “touch the stubble plain with rosy hue”. All
quite romantic, I know, but what do we have, as writers, but the lists and the
catalogs of those images that obsess and fascinate us, and the early
experiences that taught us everything we know?
The repeated word or words can act like an anchor for the
imagination. Repetition, coming back, anaphora, whatever you’d like to call it
— the obsessive quality of this kind of writing is gorgeous to me. And listing
is not just for poets — I am sure many a fiction writer has pushed through a
stuck place with a list. Here is a link to some of my own list poems:
carolinegoodw.com
imagination. Repetition, coming back, anaphora, whatever you’d like to call it
— the obsessive quality of this kind of writing is gorgeous to me. And listing
is not just for poets — I am sure many a fiction writer has pushed through a
stuck place with a list. Here is a link to some of my own list poems:
carolinegoodw.com
Enjoy!
RANA DRAYTONII (California Red-Legged Frog)
For I
will consider my Cat Jeoffry.
will consider my Cat Jeoffry.
For
he is the servant of the Living God duly and daily serving Him.
he is the servant of the Living God duly and daily serving Him.
For
at the first glance of the glory of God in the East he worships in his Way.
at the first glance of the glory of God in the East he worships in his Way.
For
this is done by wreathing his body seven times round with elegant quickness.
this is done by wreathing his body seven times round with elegant quickness.
—
Christopher Smart (1722-1771), Jubilate
Agno
Christopher Smart (1722-1771), Jubilate
Agno
for my
hands also held him
hands also held him
for he
was dry and tiny at the edge of the pond
was dry and tiny at the edge of the pond
where the mud shone
for the
rain arrived with the tides and it filled my dreams
rain arrived with the tides and it filled my dreams
and in my dreams we gazed into our
own skulls
own skulls
for the
poem rose up the tree trunk
poem rose up the tree trunk
for
paint held the dust motes and pigment
paint held the dust motes and pigment
and the young man painted an owl on
the bricks
the bricks
and it was good
for
there were the torn clouds
there were the torn clouds
and sea lavender the purple
stems
stems
for
behind the white latticework the weeds glowed
behind the white latticework the weeds glowed
and a light arrived from the coast
and the hissing was high in the
cypress
cypress
for he
also held me in his hands
also held me in his hands
for the
end of life is nothing
end of life is nothing
for a
fragrant sage blew in from the desert
fragrant sage blew in from the desert
and the hummingbird and woodpecker
made
made
their sounds in the
lane
lane
for the
man on the corner in the twilight
man on the corner in the twilight
for the
bluish smoke
bluish smoke
for he
called to my beloved on the other side
called to my beloved on the other side
and i nearly sensed her
for the
turtle in the ocean filled with eggs
turtle in the ocean filled with eggs
for the
burrs and the weeds
burrs and the weeds
for the
shape of feathers
shape of feathers
and the ways in which they feel
against the skin
for
their fine hooks and barbs
their fine hooks and barbs
for he
dies every day of starvation
dies every day of starvation
and of thirst and of abandonment
for the
ways in which we take our leave are manifold and growing
ways in which we take our leave are manifold and growing
for the
sound of his voice was like nothing
sound of his voice was like nothing
and was like everything
for the
soil held it all rotting
soil held it all rotting
for the
flame and the bowl of fresh water
flame and the bowl of fresh water
for the
music of the pearly throat
music of the pearly throat
and the pond that finally
called us all by name